literature

Your killer

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Literature Text

Place your life in my hands
The condescending life you operate
Through nothing is but a lie
In the mind of a simple minded human

A gift
Presented unwillingly to you
A way to face reality
Without the lucid truth unfolding

Watching you struggle
Brings a smile to my face
Tightening the rope
To each of your cries

"Please please release me"
The young soul begged.
A simple raise of the eyebrow
Informed you
You had no chance

The raise of my knife
Spliced the center of your palm
Blood danced down towards your arm
As you struggled some more into my embrace

"Scream" I pleaded

No mercy is given
For the games I play
Seen as a savior
For all to see

You given up
What a shame
Needless to say
I was enjoying this game

Drip drop
Drop drip
Blood trickled to the floor
The sweet smell of victory

I placed my hand
In the puddle of blood
Hand prints covered the wall
As laughter escaped my lips

Your body laid completely naked
Blood covered you from head to toe
I glanced over my artwork
And thought out loud

Soon I will be your savior
And everyone will praise me
For finding you
Dead and tied up

But for the most part
All I see
Is what I would call
A masterpiece
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Grimmshell's avatar
Just as awesome as part 1, the only thing that "annoyed" me a bit is in the 3rd stanza, the 4th line: To each of your cry. I think it would read better if you used "cries" instead. Of course this is just my humble opinion and maybe you had a good reason for using "cry" over "cries". :)